The Breakout

Sample Chapter

Chapter 4: Settle In

"I don't understand why my mom thinks that i shouldn' t be friends with Rashawn any more. He is like my "brutha" because we've been friends for over 12 years. Maybe it's because my mom and his mom got in an arguement. I felt missunderstood because he was my buudy. When I went to school, I saw Nyla and she wasn't making me feel any better! " Hey babe. You taking me shopping today, it's me day!" "I can't today. My mom really has me on her bad side today! Do you think Rashawn and I should still be friends or not?" " You promise me today!!! This is so unfair, it's all bout me and I don't care about you and Rashawn!" We left the room on a good note. After school finished, I wanted to talk to Rashawn to see whats going on. " Your moms is tripping Richard. I don't even know whats going on because my mom was like You can't see Richard no more!"" Do you think its because we are geting suspended fo spray paiting the teachers lounge?" "I hope because I still need to go get my suit for graduation." "Well we just got wait and see!"

Exspository Text #1

#4: Readers Response

The Galidakes found places and homes for the Oranitangs. They also provide food, shelter and comfort for the animal to have their habitat for them.

#3: Writers Response

I think the author talked about the Galidakes before leting us know about the Orangitangs because they wanted us to know what they do for a living and how animals thhey help out wild animals become safe. Also to tell us that they help to try to find homes for the animals that lost their homes.

#5: Writers Time

Dogs are very curious and interesting. Dogs are always going up to humas and sniffing their butts. This is because theynwant to identify you and who you are. they also want be comfortable around strangers to know that they aren't being attack. Dogs also react when you try to run away. For example, if you are afraid of dogs, and you run away, they will smell your sent and chase after you. They dont want you to be afraid but if you run, they will make you very afraid by biting you!!!!!!!!!!

Interview = 10 questions

1. How do you feel about domestic violence?

2. Do you think that it is just males that cause and distribute to domestic violence?

3. If you were to be in a realionship with somebody who abused you, how would you try to find a way to get out?

4. Would you go to your family for help to get out a realtionship? Why or why not?

5. At what age do you think that domestic violence start? Why or why not?

6. Would you tell your children that domestic violence is wrong or right and why?

7. Who do you think causes people to act and take control of their partner and why?

8. If you were to tell your partner who has beaten you, what would you say?

9. Do you think you stop domestic violence before people start to kill their partner?

10. If you were in this situations, what would you do to solve it?

What you didn't know!!

NO, NO, NO!!

What you didn't know, I knew. Feel brand new!

Where you go , I go

Wear that knowledge your teaher gave you!

Don't you feel weak when I knew what you didn't know.

So week after week, hear we go

Who can you interview and wher can you find information?

The people that I would interview for my feature article are teens and adults. I would want to interview these people because many relationships have been in situations that leads to violence for both you and your partner. Also because my aunt have been in a relationship for domestic violence for alot of time now and she has been trying so hard to get out.

Subject verb agreement

Went I went to a Hananah Montana concert during the summer, a lot of kids were screaming and shouting the songs. There was many people there.There calling her name out loud. But before the concert, the line was filled with Hannah fans and screaming fans. The line was very long. The line went up to 42nd to 53rd street. I was very excited. The day came and as soon as she came in her limo, kids starting scream her name"Miley Cyrus ROCKS!!!!!!!" i too was screaming. When she started singing many kids started to cry and sins along with her. This day was the most exciting day that has ever happen to me.