Friday, May 21, 2010

The Breakout

Sample Chapter
Chapter 4: Settle In
"I don't understand why my mom thinks that i shouldn' t be friends with Rashawn any more. He is like my "brutha" because we've been friends for over 12 years. Maybe it's because my mom and his mom got in an arguement. I felt missunderstood because he was my buudy. When I went to school, I saw Nyla and she wasn't making me feel any better! " Hey babe. You taking me shopping today, it's me day!" "I can't today. My mom really has me on her bad side today! Do you think Rashawn and I should still be friends or not?" " You promise me today!!! This is so unfair, it's all bout me and I don't care about you and Rashawn!" We left the room on a good note. After school finished, I wanted to talk to Rashawn to see whats going on. " Your moms is tripping Richard. I don't even know whats going on because my mom was like You can't see Richard no more!"" Do you think its because we are geting suspended fo spray paiting the teachers lounge?" "I hope because I still need to go get my suit for graduation." "Well we just got wait and see!"

Wednesday, March 3, 2010

Exspository Text #1

#4: Readers Response

The Galidakes found places and homes for the Oranitangs. They also provide food, shelter and comfort for the animal to have their habitat for them.

#3: Writers Response

I think the author talked about the Galidakes before leting us know about the Orangitangs because they wanted us to know what they do for a living and how animals thhey help out wild animals become safe. Also to tell us that they help to try to find homes for the animals that lost their homes.

#5: Writers Time

Dogs are very curious and interesting. Dogs are always going up to humas and sniffing their butts. This is because theynwant to identify you and who you are. they also want be comfortable around strangers to know that they aren't being attack. Dogs also react when you try to run away. For example, if you are afraid of dogs, and you run away, they will smell your sent and chase after you. They dont want you to be afraid but if you run, they will make you very afraid by biting you!!!!!!!!!!